Here is an example of having to alter a composition late in the painting to make it a better one. My original concept was to have the two aspens standing alone. Here, I’ve drawn them in pencil on the watercolor paper and added some local color (I mixed a red, yellow and blue on the right tree and added some burnt sienna to the left tree).
Here I wet the paper around the aspens and add washes of yellow, red and blue and let them “mingle” on the paper. I also add a touch of mineral violet. It’s always good to include violet in a landscape!
I add a little more shadow color on the trees, more dark markings, start the log and pine tree, and add a few deeper greens (out of the same three colors) behind the trees, plus some more purple. All of these colors will have an influence, although I’ll cover some of them up later.
In this step, I further develop the background, adding the other pine and some darker foliage. This is when I begin seeing that things aren’t right.
I’ve decided that because I didn’t repeat the white trees anywhere, you are “stuck there” and the eye can’t move around the painting. That is not good! The trees are too isolated, so I pull out a small piece of Mr. Clean Magic Eraser, wet it, take a couple of scraps of watercolor paper (you can use any stiff paper), put them on either side of what I want to lift, and lift out three small additional trees. Already, it looks better. While I’m at it, I lift out a little light green foliage for the aspens.
Finished! I darken the top half of the tree on the right to make it less similar to the left one, put shadowing and detail on my new trees, add a shadow in the right foreground so that your eye goes to the left foreground and follows the light up to the main tree.
Being able to spot a problem and decide how to correct it comes through a lot of mileage with the paint brush! If you know something isn’t right but don’t know what, get a “second pair of eyes” to look at your painting. Classes, workshops, dvd’s, books, critiques – all of this helps train you to spot a problem and solve it yourself.
I hope you’ve enjoyed this post and that it was helpful. Pass it along to your friends! Next post will be about negative painting.
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